TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Magi 9 [TL][Timed][typeset][Edited][QCReportInside]
Workraw: Magi09-RC

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays for the ones reading this!

6
to conquer a dungeon and loot all the\N treasure in it to replace what was stolen.
to conquer a dungeon and loot all the\N treasure in it to redeem myself.
{Since there's only the verb "to atone" here, we need to think of some kind of reason. I think this is more correct.}

18
I realized that in order for me to move on, I would have to take responsibility for what happened in my past.
I believed that before I would move on, I'd first like to set my past matters straight.
{It's a thought, and not a realization {he's not forced to take responsibility, but he wants to.}}

62
But don't you think you're going too far?
Do you honestly believe you'll achieve something with {\i1}this{\i0}?
{The focus is rather them doing vile actions, not the degree of the action}
{aligns with line 67 too}

75
However, after I was done talking with him, I ended up believing in him again.
However, after I was done talking with him, I reconsidered. {ended up reconsidering}
{slight nuance change}

82
{I don't feel like we should change this into a question since the sentence isn't pitched that way}

141
What's the meaning of this, Alibaba?!
Which path will you choose, Alibaba?!
{It's about his decision. Dou iu koto da =/= dou suru no da}

154
You came looking for us{me}, didn't you?
You came looking for me, didn't you?
{I feel like it's especially aimed at Sinbad in this context, related to an earlier line}

195
{\i1}Even if my oppenent is Sinbad himself,
{\i1}Even if my opponent is Sinbad himself,
{small typo here}

257
This world is strife with chaos. {This looks wrong to me. ''This world is in strife'' or ''This world is in chaos.'' Not both, though.''}
This world is in strife and chaos.
{this any better?}

284
{seems the timing overlaps a bit here with 285. Do note that}

298
{bad subtitle placement with the japanese subs on the background...?}

305
That guy's amazing!
{alternatively, What a surprise!}
{also, I doubt the arabian text on the background, why is it written from left to right here lol}

358
It looks like another strong guy has appeared!
It looks like another annoying guy has appeared!
{Alternative. Liberally the same, just giving a closer definition for koihito}